[Bpf-cybersecurity] For Review - draft report BPF cybersecurity

[Wim Degezelle]

Dear all, 

Below is a link to the draft BPF Cybersecurity output report. Please review and provide your feedback and additional input by Friday 18 Oct CoB. 
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1t2vAt1cLd6tsUD5NM4s75wp4FQA1XWxAn-23lVJO7es/edit?usp=sharing 

Your feedback is appreciated!  Feel free to work directly in the google doc or to provide your feedback over email.

A few words on the draft BPF output & process:

The draft report is a combination of input from the call for contributions incorporated in the text of the BPF Research and Background paper that was published in July. (as suggested at the Sept 24 BPF Call)
	I left tracked changes on, so that it is clear what is new content from the contributions and what is text from the original research paper.

The ‘Formal contributions’ are listed in the acknowledgements (on p.2) and reflected in updates to the contents of the report, but without additional references. This is similar to the Research paper where key contributors are named upfront, without references in the text.  All contributions - full text - are available on the BPF webpage. 

Projects and initiatives are included under the analysis of the respective agreement (section III in the report). The report would benefit from additional examples !


Next steps:
google docs draft shared with BPF for review & additional input
review of draft report by 18 Oct CoB

publication of revised draft BPF output on IGF website by Oct 22
community invited to provide feedback:  Oct 22 - Nov 29 (last day of IGF2019)
final BPF output report published after IGF2019


The Summary of the BPF Cybersecurity call on 24 September is available on the BPF webpage
https://www.intgovforum.org/multilingual/filedepot_download/8395/1742


Thank you for your cooperation.
Kind Regards
Wim
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Wim Degezelle
Consultant IGF Secretariat /  BPF Cybersecurity

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